
Can you see my eyes?
Can you feel it being emotionless?
Can you stare deeper?
Can you see any anger?
Can you look closer?
Can you feel sorrow?
Can you stare a bit?
Can you see tears about to spill?
What do you think?
Do you have any hint?
Do you see limitless emotions tangled?
Do you see they are about to burst?
They say eyes speak more than words.
They say eyes are the path to express.
Then why i feel my eyes have become feelingless!!
Then why do not i feel any drop of tears!!
May be because i have embraced the pain?
May be because i feel life has no meaning?
I tried harder to fight back…
I screamed, shouted and cried with teary eyes…
But seems this time has paused…
Giving on my peace a full stop!!!
Waiting for my eyes to sparkle again…
Waiting for my eyes to shine again!!!
Heya folks… Whatsup… As you know me already, random thought knocked on door of my head😄 i opened and expressed hehehe… Do tell me how you felt friends… Will be back with other post, see you all, bye bye…🤗🤗❤️❤️
💗Love💗
🌺Soni🌺
Well expressed emotional poem Soni. I love your eye sketch , it’s awesome. ❤🙂
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Thank you so much dear❤️❤️
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You’re very welcome ❤🙂
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Amazing
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Thank you❤️
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Wonderful
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Thank you😊
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बहुत इमोशनल कविता है ।शेर है कहिए इरशाद
“आंखों की गुस्ताखियां ,
आंखों का शर्म -हया से
चिलमन का गिरना यूं सूर्ख रूख़सार से
से महबूब को देख कर सूर्ख़सार होना
आंखों की गु़स्ताखियां लबों की लरज़ीश
आंखों से मोहब्बत का बयां होना।
ऊर्दू लफ़्ज़ों के मिंनिग:-
1.ग़ुस्ताख़ियां=गलतियां ख़ता
2.चिलमन=पलकों
3.सूर्ख़ =लाल
4.रुख़सार=गाल
5.महबूब=लवर्स
6.सूर्ख़सार=शर्म से लाल हो
7.लबों की लरज़ीश=होंठों का थरथराना
8.बयां=ज़ाहिर या मालूम होना
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❤️❤️❤️❤️
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👌👌👌👌
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😃 thank you
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,🥰🥰
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Well expressed… Beautiful lines… Liked it 💯👍
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The combination of the eye sketch and the poem was powerful, as I read each line I kept going back to the eye.
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Thank you so much😃❤️❤️
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Soni, this post was really something. I want to reflect on it a bit and then come back to it.
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Wooo… Thanks alot for liking my poem Allen… Means a lot…❤️❤️❤️
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Beautifully written! This piece really hit me in the heart, Soni. Know that you’re in my thoughts and prayers. ❤
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Effectively emotionless
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😃😃😃
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Thank you ,Soni cool
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Well…great artist great words
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Thank you so much😃
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Just like 3D eye😍
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Thank you💖
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A very nice poem!
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