
She was exhausted and sat in her room.
Suddenly a crying voice echoed in her ears!!
She could not think at first who it could be, as the sound continued, her heart skipped a bit.
She thought to go outside of her room to have a look, but could not see any figurine…
She came back and sat surprised!!
Slowly that voice surpressed…
After sometime, she went to wash her hands, saw a light flickering in adjacent room!!
She peeped inside a bit, room was emtpy!!
She switched off that room’s light and went inside her room.
Few minutes later, again a crying, trembling voice deepened, she was like, oh god damn!!
Again she had to go outside to see, and again the flickering light!!
Oh my godness, what the damn it is!! She had a bit of fear inside, with that she moved ahead to go inside the room…
With the on and off of the light, her body shivered a bit..
She looked around everywhere, in a thought of anybody there??
Suddenly again the crying, sobbing voice…
She freezed for a bit there, unable to move here and there…
In a second a big banging sound reverberated, and everything became sssshhhhhhhh….
And a weird humming voice murmered near her, saying hssssss, i caught you!!!, she badly wanted to run but it was like someone holding her legs tight, she just screamed and screamed and fainted over there…
The next day, when she opened her eyes, found herself lying on her bed!!
She could not think if it was reality or was a horrible dream!!
She just could not think!!!

Sorry for any mistakes friends, its the first time i am trying for a horror short story!!
Please let me know your feedbacks friends, how it is!!
Love❤️❤️
Soni
Thank god I got to read this scary one but nice one in day time not at night👍🌃
Nice tried👌..
Keep writing.. Keep scaring 😅
Bless you 😍
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Thanks alot my dear… Glad you liked it… I was thinking whether i was able to convey the scary feeling properly or not😬
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It was👍😇😇
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Well said, Aushi – you’re totally right! 🙂
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Thank you guys 😍❤️❤️
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Wow dear ❤️ this is so cool, actually I could feel it while reading.. seems like you are really experienced in writing
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Thank you so much dear…well you are right, its my personal experience in my hostel room 😬😬
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Ah well… So u had such experiences more? maybe you could club it and publish something,I’m sure it would be really great….
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Thank you dear for the tips🤗🤗❤️❤️
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Always welcome ❤️
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Good job for a first attempt! Well written.
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Thank you so much dear ❤️❤️❤️
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Nice soni😄 you should write about the time in our pg too, when 4 us ran out screaming😂and everyone from downstairs came to check on us😂
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😂😂 yeah dear… What a scary day that was my god!!! Cannot forget lifetime🤐🤐 when i was writing only getting goose bumps 😂
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😄😄
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Nice blog you got and thanks for following
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Thank you so much dear…❤️
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You’re welcome! All the best
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Superb dear❤️ frightening
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Yes re… I was hell scared, as its my personal experience 😬
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What!!!!
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Yeah dear…🤐 In my hostel life
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😵
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😁😁😁😁😂
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😦 was it after our Annabelle movie experience re??
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😂😂 no re… It was somewhere between 2014-2015
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clevdr.. looks like a saiance
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Nice 🖤
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Thank you dear ❤️
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Very nice but scary 👌
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Nice scary story! Well done!
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Thank you so much dear☺️☺️☺️ finally i wrote it…thought how it would be, but glad its accepted 🤗
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🤠🔥 👻keep writing Soni! You are good at it.
What was your day like?
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Thank you so much… Well nothing much… Wrote 2 blog posts, went through some amazing post by my blogger friends… And as usual office work… How was your day…
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It just started! I plan to work around the house! What kind of office work do you do?
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Oh oh… Have a good day then!!! IT industry i work in☺️
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Oh, well nifty! That sounds cool!
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Thank you ❤️
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How long have you been doing IT?
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Well 6yrs…🙂🙂🙂
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12 years in the prison
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Wooooo long days😃
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Soni, what is a typical day off like for you?
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We dont have off days… Weekends are only off days for us
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What do you do on weekends?
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Well same…drawings or singings or outings
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If I have not already, I dare you to sing. If I have already, my bad!
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Hahaha… I accept your dare…. 🤩🤩 Well i am already A++ in STAR MAKER app 😃😃…grateful☺️🙏🏻
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Do you go by Soni Cool?
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No… Star Maker is an app basically… You can just sing any song of your choice and record over there. Based on your singing performance you get ranks☺️☺️ i have different user id created there…
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So you will sing a song for Brother’s Campfire?
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Good one Soni. First try came out really well. Keep writing. 😍
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Thanks alot dear…❤️❤️❤️❤️
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You were totally successful in conveying the scary feeling properly here. Goosebumps! Well done. 🙂
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Thank you very much dear… I am glad i was able to scare 😂
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You’d be a great person to hang about with for Halloween 🎃
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😄😄😄😄😄
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Thought provoking read
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Thank you dear 🤗🤗
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I can’t read it at night….Because I am afraid of all this stuff. But I will definitely read it, With everyone during the day time😅😅
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Hahahah yeah sure dear…do read at day time 😃😃
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Fun to read. I love scary stories.
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Thank you so much dear 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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With the world how it is right now, be so easy to get caught up in a nightmare place like this.
This piece will speak to the place so many are feeling lost in or trapped in.
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Thank you dear❤️❤️❤️ and thanks for visiting my post🤗
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So honoured you chose to follow my blog. I will be keeping up with yours as well. Yeah!
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Thank you so much my dear❤️❤️❤️ i would be honored to be linked with you 🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Annabelle…oh noo Soni 🙂
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Yeah 😄😄
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Pray well and sleep🙂
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🙂⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️😊
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You succeeded! I found it scary:) Try elaborating and making it even longer.. Keep writing…you have the gift:)
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Thank you😃😃😃
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Thank you so much for sharing. You have built suspense really intelligently in this story. While I was reading I just wanted to find out what happened – and like her want to know whether it was a dream or something else!
One piece of constructive criticism: keep writing with your style and find your story voice. That’s what made this piece. (I am not an expert, just someone who really loves writing too. 😊)
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Thank you so much for great suggestion😃😃 i am glad you liked the post… Yeah would keep writing in my own style as always 😃😃 thanks for visiting…
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Oh! One other thing that has helped me is that I am excited to keep learning new words, to keep reading books in genres I like and ones I haven’t tried much too. There’s all manner writing classes online (many of them for free!) if you’re interested in learning more. 😊
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Woww… Many thanks for the besutiful advise… Yesh i would love to learn in order to gain more idea towards my writings😃❤️
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Very well and I enjoyed it. You are amazing and keep on creating, trying new things and be the best you 👏
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Thank you so much dear❤️❤️🤗🤗 thanks alot for visiting❤️❤️
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